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August 23, 2005
A few lines I've excised from my novel-in-progress
"No more Twizzlers for me," exclaimed the former senator from Nebraska.
Hiking boots, superglue, a bag of nickels -- yup, that was everything.
Caterpillars? No, he thought, that was impossible. Or was it?
"Golly," Frank said suspiciously.
The fabric was itchy; it reminded him of death.
Posted by teb at August 23, 2005 11:25 AM