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May 25, 2006

More lines I’ve excised from my forthcoming novel

One, two -- three? So he did have an extra thumb.

The bikini-clad princess placed the amulet atop the sacred stone and shouted "Let's dance!"

Frank was tired. Tired of work. Tired of life. Tired of ham.

"Cripes," he whispered. "It's those darn Nazis again."

The camel nodded wearily, exhaled, and drove away.

Posted by teb at May 25, 2006 10:40 AM

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