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August 17, 2006
Still more lines I've excised from my forthcoming novel
A hush came over the natatorium as Nate removed his towel with a matador's angry flourish.
Electric donuts, he thought. Of course!
He sniffed the air, tentatively at first, and then with abandon, tilting his head back, closing his eyes and cupping his hands to his nostrils.
That sound could only mean one thing: Someone had dropped an enormous box of bells.
"Well," he sighed, stroking the dolphin absentmindedly, "I guess it's time for lunch."
Posted by teb at August 17, 2006 12:09 PM