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February 19, 2007
Even more lines that I've excised from my forthcoming novel
As the evening wore on, the dwarves grew peckish.
"Well," he said, taking another bite of pie, "at least we're not stranded on the moon anymore."
Their romantic embrace was interrupted by the sound of a cat puking vigorously.
The sun set over the ocean, like a very powerful flashlight slowly being lowered behind an extremely large body of water.
Oh no, he thought, this isn't toothpaste.
Posted by teb at February 19, 2007 12:41 PM